Tell me if this is a good dating profile
Hi, I'm name is Shaun I'm 30 (wow! When did that happen) I'm 5'7 and 233lb. I have what I call "extra padding" but through hard work that "padding" will be gone. I have already lost 30lb (yea me!) I'm a non-smoker non-drug user. I do drink on occasions but not vary often. I'm an aspiring Author who loves adventure.
I'm looking for some one to share my life with and to make new friends.
My hobbies are: painting, sculpting, video games, reading, writing, hiking, biking.
So would this make a good profile? Do I need to add anything or take away any advice is appreciated
Thanks