Otage
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If I remember right I posted this right before the latest fall of the forum and it was lost pretty quick, so posting it again. I don't write poems and I'm bit embarrased about it, but I'm in that funny manic lol mood today
I actually knew the people this poem is about(my former upstairs neighbours) and they were actually nice people, they just had a habit of 'healthy way' of clearing the air and the poem is bit overdaramatic
Domestic disturbance
Terrible trembling from upstairs I hear!
Disturbance so fierce,
even batteries can feel.
Shouts, mockery and insults!
More than my content state can bear.
Loud, madness, without results!
I wonder if everything is all right up there?
Silence, shout, up and down,
echoing threw the corridor.
Sirene, doupt, all so loud,
shattering heard with mourn.
Fierce knocking,
on the neighbour door.
The force of law,
arrived to our hall.
Finally!
To end it all.
Reason for fighting,
is already gone.
Tranguility deceiving,
fighting starts for once more.
Longevity loosing,
disturbing me for never more. (<--Too obviously from Poes Raven?:rofl
I actually knew the people this poem is about(my former upstairs neighbours) and they were actually nice people, they just had a habit of 'healthy way' of clearing the air and the poem is bit overdaramaticDomestic disturbance
Terrible trembling from upstairs I hear!
Disturbance so fierce,
even batteries can feel.
Shouts, mockery and insults!
More than my content state can bear.
Loud, madness, without results!
I wonder if everything is all right up there?
Silence, shout, up and down,
echoing threw the corridor.
Sirene, doupt, all so loud,
shattering heard with mourn.
Fierce knocking,
on the neighbour door.
The force of law,
arrived to our hall.
Finally!
To end it all.
Reason for fighting,
is already gone.
Tranguility deceiving,
fighting starts for once more.
Longevity loosing,
disturbing me for never more. (<--Too obviously from Poes Raven?:rofl
