The Gay Heaven Poem

[Jamie]

Greens and blues and reds as well
All are gathered in a place that`s not hell
You should decide if you`re in or out
Heard it once and I knew what`s it about.
Everything here is on my taste
Anything`s in, nothing to waste.
Videos, pictures, laughing and fun
Enjoy the forum, don`t have to run.
Nobody`s forced but you HAVE to !


Hope you like it LOL

 

[Bo.]

That is fantastic! :thumbs up:

 

[AlSun]

Not 'only' just a writer but also a little poet!

Pretty good!

 

[smallsleepyrascalcat]

that's really awesome

 

[goejavin]

Absolutely cute, clever and tastic...Bravo, Jamie

:thumbs up::-*:thumbs up:

 

[Jamie]

Not 'only' just a writer but also a little poet!

Pretty good!

Well, for your knowledge in high school they published one of my poems in the news paper they said it was the most romantic poem dedicated to a girl from a high school boy

It was something like: (well, I`ll try to translate it but...it`s kinda hard )

I could have all the stars on the sky
But I want none cause you`re the star of my life,
Only us, together,
We share the kiss and the sky,
the water and the flowers
We can move mountains
And make the time stay still
For just the two of us.

I know in english sounds ...weird but in romanian sounds very nice.

 

[AlSun]

Wow, what a cute poem!

Thanks for translating it for us.

 

[XMan101]

Excellent, Jamie

 

[glamfunk84]

Genius, genius! :thumbs up:

 

[bloop2]

lol thats adorable

 

[iFairylicious]

lol what rhyme style did you use?

 

[Jamie]

lol what rhyme style did you use?

LOL!
Well the last three lines I think they are in Englyn Milwr rhyme and the first ones are in Heroic Couplet. Hehe! It`s not like could have written one in a sestina style just kidding

 

[iFairylicious]

Maybe we need a gay heaven sonnet! HAHAHAHA gotta have iambic pentamater....(pathetic I am an english major and can't spell that) lol

 

[Jamie]

Maybe we need a gay heaven sonnet! HAHAHAHA gotta have iambic pentamater....(pathetic I am an english major and can't spell that) lol

Oh, well, the sonnet goes to you Glam dear! It would take me years to write it with my poor english hehe! I could write it but in my mother language hehehe but then no one will understand it! LOL!

 

[hammervice]

kool, that made me smile